"I wish I could be a fly on the wall"
When Joe got his wish,he could climb in a dish,he could circle a spoon or a plate.He could frequent your hair,or make someone swear,and for dinner, never was late.But he wanted most of all,to perch on...
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I must be a little dense tonight - is this about a fly being swatted? Not sure about the flow in this one Lee, It made me stop & start.So take care what you ask for,you may just find that door,too...
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about a guy who wished he could be a fly on the wall, listen in on other peoples conversations/secrets. And the last verse is saying be careful what you ask for, you may get it. (be invited thru the...
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Be careful what you ask for because you may get it, so true,cute LeeD E
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Thanks D E, and Matt I changed the title so you could comprehend better *grins*. LeeIf you are a dreamer, come in,If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,A hope-er. a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...If...
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Dear eagle eye,I think the last stanza needs rephrasing, I know what you mean, but it just doesn't quite make sense..maybe it just needs an "s" & a wish (then you could take "wish" out of the...
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ok I like "invites" :-) and yuk at your dog for eating flies ! LOLIf you are a dreamer, come in,If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,A hope-er. a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...If you're a pretender,...
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I enjoyed this very much! I like the way it just zips along, and the last stanza - warning the reader. Nice one!'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral
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Thanks Jean, glad you enjoyed it, was meant to be a fun look at an old saying. LeeIf you are a dreamer, come in,If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,A hope-er. a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...If...
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Clever you are, my friend!This was a good one.I was a fly in my former life. Anyway, I enjoyed this.AsheTamara
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I liked this alot. It really flowed so well and it gave you a nice lesson
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like this, what it made me think of is when you wish to know what people are talking about, and you find out its you they are talking about....nice write
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Be care what you wish for! This one was an unexpected delight. Not at all the 'fly on the wall' I expected from the title. Good goin'!
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